If you like the following stories, you’ll Love Hail Mary Pass: Episode 1 of The Time Patriot series:
• Pastwatch: The Redemption of Christopher Columbus by Orson Scott Card
• Island in the Sea of Time by S.M. Stirling
• Timeline by Michael Crichton
• The Guns of the South by Harry Turtledove
• 1632 by Eric Flint
Perfect for readers who enjoy:
• Military science fiction featuring real historical figures at pivotal moments
• Time travel thrillers where protecting history means fighting for the future
• Political fiction grounded in genuine concern for American institutions
• Ensemble military casts built on loyalty, sharp wit, and earned trust
America is one spark away from civil war. The only man who can help has been dead for 237 years.
In 2037, the United States is tearing itself apart. Political corruption has hollowed out every institution the Founding Fathers built, citizens no longer trust their government, and the Midwest is armed and waiting. President Wade Harrison has tried every conventional solution available to him. Now he is asking Colonel Marc McKnight and the HERO team to do something no one has ever attempted.
Travel to 1787. Find George Washington. Bring him back with you.
McKnight opposes the mission from the first briefing. The risks are extraordinary, the odds of success are low, and a single mistake could erase the nation they are trying to save. But if he refuses, Harrison will give the mission to someone with less experience and no idea what can go wrong. McKnight takes the command.
Finding Washington is only the beginning of the problem.
The team drops into the cold Virginia mountains two months before the Constitutional Convention, armed with weapons Washington cannot explain, technology that looks like sorcery in his frame of reference, and and a copy of a constitution he has not yet seen. Washington is exactly as sharp and cautious as his reputation suggests. Convincing him that they arrived from 250 years in his future requires demonstration after demonstration, complete honesty, and the patience to answer questions from one of history’s most strategic minds.
Then a body turns up on the perimeter of their camp. Young. Recently dead. Carrying a brand new Luger pistol and Nazi credentials dated 1935.
Someone else has a time machine. And they reached 1787 first.
Hail Mary Pass is Episode 1 of the Time Patriot series by Kim Megahee, set in the world of the HERO team adventures. The mission to bring Washington forward has already been compromised by forces the team has not yet identified. The founding of America is the most important moment in history. Someone else is already there.
One republic. One founding father. One last chance to get it right.
If you like the following stories, you’ll Love Hail Mary Pass: Episode 1 of The Time Patriot series:
• Pastwatch: The Redemption of Christopher Columbus by Orson Scott Card
• Island in the Sea of Time by S.M. Stirling
• Timeline by Michael Crichton
• The Guns of the South by Harry Turtledove
• 1632 by Eric Flint
Perfect for readers who enjoy:
• Military science fiction featuring real historical figures at pivotal moments
• Time travel thrillers where protecting history means fighting for the future
• Political fiction grounded in genuine concern for American institutions
• Ensemble military casts built on loyalty, sharp wit, and earned trust
HAIL MARY PASS is available in eBook, Audiobook, and Print (paperback) formats.
Dear Reader,
Thanks for taking the time to learn more about Hail Mary Pass: Episode 1 of The Time Patriot adventure series.
First, I wanted to say that this book was named long before the book Hail Mary by another author.
This series idea came out of the blue. Let me tell you the story.
I had already written four other time travel adventure books (Time Limits, The Time Twisters, Time Revolution, and Time Plague). I was trying to brainstorm a new plot. It happened by chance.
Martha and I are news-junkies. TV News is playing on at least two TVs in our house whenever we are home.
Do you ever yell at the talking heads or the politicians on the news? We do it all the time.
One day I was exceptionally irritated by a commentary, so I stood up and vented. I asked what I thought was a rhetorical question.
“What do you think our forefathers would think,” I asked, “if they knew what we have done with this grand experiment of theirs into a constitutional republic form of government?”
Martha said, “Well, you’ve got a time machine. Why don’t you go ask them?”
That got my brain rolling and the plot finally formed in my weak brain. It triggered several weeks of research into George Washington to see what he was really like.
By almost all accounts, Washington was a shrewd, suspicious, and cautious businessman with a mighty sense of fairness. If he lived today, he would be Customer Service’s worst nightmare. Most of the time, I believe, he was concerned about getting cheated. He was a good steward of his money, but also the inheritance of Martha’s two children from her first marriage.
My endeavor in this first episode was to give Washington the respect he deserves but help the reader see him as a human man with faults. I hope I succeeded.
How do you convince a man from the 1700s that you’re from the future? That was McKnight’s big challenge in this first episode. Let me know if you think his solution would be effective in real life.
Thanks for browsing my website.
Cheers,
Kim
PS: If you have any questions, please feel free to connect with me on the Contact Page.
BOOK: HAIL MARY PASS: Episode 1 of THE TIME PATRIOT series
Author: Kim Megahee
Series: THE TIME PATRIOT series
Genres: Science Fiction/Time Travel
Science Fiction/Military
Science Fiction/Action & Adventure
Thrillers/Political
Science Fiction/Alternate History
Publisher: The Kimmer Group LLC
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Cover Designer:Aleaca from 99Designs.com
• NARRATOR: Jeff Brewer
• RELEASE DATE: 07-31-2025
• LANGUAGE: English
• FORMAT: Unabridged Audiobook
• LENGTH: 3 hours and 31 minutes
• ISBN RETAIL: 979-8-9900955-1-9
• ISBN LIBRARY: 979-8-9900955-1-9
• ASIN: B0FKHJSZWS
• RELEASE DATE: 10-11-2022
• LANGUAGE: English
• FORMAT: Unabridged eBook
• LENGTH: 155 pages
• ISBN: 978-1734019087
• ASIN: B0BGK44MJN
• RELEASE DATE: 10-10-2022
• LANGUAGE: English
• FORMAT: Unabridged Print (Paperback) Book
• LENGTH: 153 pages
• ISBN: 978-1734019094
• ASIN: 1734019093
1. Reluctant Hero
McKnight repeatedly states he does not want the mission because the risks to history are too high.
Evidence: Chapter 1: “McKnight was not in favor of the mission… the risks were too great.”
2. Hail Mary Pass (self-named trope)
The entire mission is framed as a desperate, last-ditch effort.
Evidence: Title, Chapter 2: “This mission is a shot in the dark. Some call it a Hail Mary pass.”
3. Time Travel
Core mechanic and plot driver.
Evidence: Multiple jumps between 2037 and 1787 using beacons and the time engine.
4. Historical Figures as Characters
George Washington is a major POV-adjacent character.
Evidence: Chapters 5–11: Washington’s dialogue, decisions, and interactions with the team.
5. Military Special Forces Team
HERO Team (Rangers + civilians) operates with military precision.
Evidence: Cast list, Chapter 3 briefing, combat scenes.
6. Nazis as Villains
1937 Nazis travel back to interfere.
Evidence: Chapters 9, 12, 15–17: Hitler Youth body, platoon attack on the farm.
7. Mentor / Protégé
Retired General Drake mentors McKnight.
Evidence: Chapter 13: Drake offers to accompany McKnight to speak “retired general to retired general.”
8. Bodyguard / Protection Duty
The team’s primary goal shifts to keeping Washington alive.
Evidence: Chapters 10–17: Shadowing Washington, the farmhouse defense.
9. Dead Body Discovery
Cutty finds the mutilated Nazi youth.
Evidence: Chapter 9.
10. Tech vs. Primitive Weapons
Modern carbines, night vision, and M60s versus Brown Bess muskets.
Evidence: Chapter 7 demonstration; Chapters 15–17 firefight.
11. Beacon / Time Device
Portable time travel devices with return function.
Evidence: Multiple uses throughout.
12. Time Bubble Danger
Early version of the technology kills the Nazi boy.
Evidence: Chapter 9: body damage explained as time-engine hazard.
13. Loyal Valet / Body Servant
Will Lee remains at Washington’s side.
Evidence: Chapters 5–11, 17.
14. Farmhouse Refuge
The Joyner farm serves as temporary shelter.
Evidence: Chapters 14–17.
15. Ambush / Night Assault
German platoon attacks the farm at night.
Evidence: Chapters 15–17.
16. Covering Fire / Tactical Retreat
Team uses modern weapons to cover withdrawal.
Evidence: Chapter 17.
17. Reluctant Ally
Washington hesitates to travel to 2037.
Evidence: Chapter 11–13: he wants to sleep on the decision.
18. Government Conspiracy / Classified Tech
Time travel is hidden from the public.
Evidence: Chapter 1: “the government classified it.”
19. Political Corruption Theme
2037 America is on the brink of civil war because of career politicians.
Evidence: Chapter 2 dialogue with President Harrison.
20. Team Loyalty / Band of Brothers
Rangers repeatedly risk their lives for one another and the mission.
Evidence: Chapters 16–17.
21. DNA Evidence
Used to identify the Nazi body.
Evidence: Chapter 9.
22. Night Vision / Thermal Goggles
Used during the farmhouse defense.
Evidence: Chapter 17.
23. President as Character
President Harrison appears in person.
Evidence: Chapters 1–2.
24. Alternate History Threat
Nazis attempt to prevent the Constitution from being written.
Evidence: Chapter 12: Himmler’s orders.
25. Covert Operation
The mission is kept secret even within the government.
Evidence: Chapter 3 briefing.
26. Heroic Last Stand Potential
The team accepts they may die protecting Washington.
Evidence: Chapter 17 discussion of casualties.
Trope Heatmap
Character Tropes (Core)
– Reluctant Hero, Military Special Forces Team, Historical Figures as Characters, Loyal Valet, President as Character, Mentor/Protégé
Plot Tropes (Core)
– Time Travel, Hail Mary Pass, Dead Body Discovery, Ambush/Night Assault, Alternate History Threat, Covering Fire/Tactical Retreat, Tech vs. Primitive Weapons
Setting Tropes (Core)
– 1787 Wilderness, 2037 Near-Future, Nazi 1937, Time Bubble Hazard
Relationship Tropes (Supporting)
– Team Loyalty/Band of Brothers, Bodyguard/Protection Duty, Reluctant Ally
Meta Tropes (Decorative)
– Self-aware “Hail Mary Pass” naming, Genre-typical time-travel rules discussion
Genre Alignment Score (Time Travel Military SF / Alternate History)
– Time Travel: 5
– Historical Figure Interaction: 5
– Military Team Tactics: 5
– Nazis as Antagonists: 5
– Hail Mary / Desperate Mission: 5
– Tech Advantage: 5
– Reluctant Hero: 4
– Political Corruption Backdrop: 3
Genre Consistency: Very high. The manuscript hits nearly every expected beat of “modern military team travels to the past” subgenre.
Freshness Factor: Moderate. The 1937 Nazi element and the specific “recruit Washington to fix 2037 politics” premise add a layer of originality.
Market Fit Insight: Strong appeal to readers of 1632, The Guns of the South, and Island in the Sea of Time. Also attractive to military SF fans who enjoy competent teams and tactical detail.
Genre Comparison
1632 – Eric Flint (modern Americans dropped into 1631 Europe; tech advantage + historical figures)
The Guns of the South – Harry Turtledove (time travelers arm Confederates; military tactics + historical figures)
Island in the Sea of Time – S.M. Stirling (Nantucket transported to 1250 BC; military leadership + tech vs. bronze age)
Pastwatch: The Redemption of Christopher Columbus – Orson Scott Card (future observers intervene in history)
Timeline – Michael Crichton (modern team sent to 14th-century France; survival + historical setting)
Key Themes
1. Duty versus personal morality
2. The weight and fragility of history
3. Technology as both savior and threat
4. Loyalty and brotherhood in combat
5. Political corruption and the loss of founding ideals
6. Sacrifice for the greater good
7. Power and responsibility of leadership
8. Fear of unintended consequences
9. Identity across time periods
10. The ripple effect of individual actions
11. Redemption of a nation
12. The limits of control in warfare and politics
Overall Assessment
The Time Patriot: Hail Mary Pass is a solid, fast-paced entry in the “modern military team in the past” subgenre of time-travel fiction. Its central strength is a clear, high-stakes premise: a reluctant Ranger team must recruit George Washington to 2037 before Nazi time travelers can erase the Constitution. That single hook drives nearly every scene and keeps the story focused.
The manuscript leans heavily on core tropes that define its identity—Time Travel, Military Special Forces Team, Historical Figures as Characters, Tech vs. Primitive Weapons, and Hail Mary Pass. These feel natural together and give the book a strong genre signature. The military details (tactics, weapons handling, team banter) are confident and believable, which helps ground the more fantastical elements. The decision to show Washington as a shrewd, cautious leader rather than a saint adds welcome texture.
The balance between Core and Supporting tropes works well overall. Character and Plot categories dominate appropriately for a mission-driven story, while Relationship and Meta tropes stay light and functional. The manuscript stays comfortably inside genre expectations (Genre Consistency: high) while adding a small twist with the political “recruit the Founder” goal (Freshness Factor: moderate). This combination should appeal to readers who enjoy 1632-style tech advantage stories and military SF teams that respect chain of command and historical figures.
Copyright © 2022 by Kimberly M. Megahee
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Hail Mary Pass: Episode 1 of the Time Patriot series/ Kim Megahee. — 1st ed.
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2:00 am – October 23, 2034 – The Sandia Mountains near Albuquerque, NM
Lieutenants Mitch Wheeler and Karen Hatcher met as freshmen in calculus class at the University of North Georgia and discovered their birthdays were one day apart. It was the first of many commonalities that drew them together.
Both grew up in urban communities in large Midwest cities and completed secondary school in three years. Both excelled in math and physics. The college environment in Dahlonega Georgia was a wilderness paradise for these two city kids.
Despite his name, Wheeler was of Hispanic descent. With an olive complexion, jet-black hair and dark brown eyes, he spent most of his free time in the gym lifting weights. He was five-foot-seven on a tall day and compensated with hours of practice in the martial arts. He had a quick wit and always found the upside of any situation.
Hatcher was taller than Wheeler with a slender, athletic build. She wore her raven hair in a ponytail most of the time. Freckles she never tried to conceal augmented her nose and upper cheeks. But her bright blue eyes were her most striking feature. She was introverted and rarely smiled but was all business with her job in the military.
She was first in their PT class for hand-to-hand combat. Wheeler took second place, setting up years of competitive friendly matches between the two. Hatcher’s fighting ability and direct manner earned the respect of male and female cadets alike.
While Hatcher excelled in combat, Wheeler surpassed everyone in physics and quantum mechanics. He read doctorate dissertations in his free time. His curiosity about the subjects might have been considered obsessive if he wasn’t having so much fun learning about it.
Hatcher and Wheeler both had serious romantic interests back home, so their shared academic direction and abilities caused them to gravitate toward each other as friends. After graduation, they still regarded themselves a team and sought assignments where they could work together. This was a factor in McKnight’s decision to recruit both for the HERO project.
Tonight, they breathed in cool desert air and basked in starlight atop a secluded hillock in the Sandia Mountains of New Mexico, just east of Albuquerque. At an altitude of 7000 feet, this region of the country was called high desert because of the low humidity and clear skies. They chose this location because of the elevation and the absence of light pollution. There was no moon tonight, and the sky was bright with stars.
“So, Wheeler, we ready yet?” Hatcher said.
Wheeler glanced at the timer on the Engine console. “Another couple of minutes and we can start recall. What time is it, anyway?”
Hatcher checked her phone. “Almost 0200 hours,” she said as she typed in the camera’s return beacon signature.
“Copy. Which test is this, Hatcher?”
“This is test number thirty-seven. The target time is October 23rd, 1934, one hundred years in the past.”
The purpose of the experiments was simple. They needed to learn how to calibrate the time travel engine to send a team to a specific date with accuracy. The tests were all the same. For each experiment, they changed the engine’s calibration, sent the camera back to photograph the stars, brought it back and calculated what time the camera landed in from their positions in the pictures. It was a tedious and painstaking process, but it was the easiest way the scientists could think of to collect the data they needed.
“Okay, it’s time. Bring it back,” Wheeler said.
Hatcher punched the recall button and a globe of light appeared over the stainless steel platform twenty yards away. As its brightness intensified, they could see the camera chariot, a four-wheeled chassis the size of a lawn mower. A stellar camera sat on it with the lens pointed up toward the stars.
As they watched, the light bulged to twice its size and dissipated. The chariot now stood before them on the platform. Following procedure, the two officers re-checked the travel calibration to confirm they recorded them correctly and Wheeler ran to the chariot to retrieve the film disk drive.
As he approached it, he thought he saw debris on top. Did something fall on it?
He hurried to the device and realized he was far too close. An angry western diamondback rattlesnake coiled around the camera. Its rattle stood upright and buzzed furiously.
Wheeler threw himself backward as it struck at his leg. He twisted as he fell, trying to avoid the exposed fangs. The snake missed his thigh by an inch but landed next to him. It coiled again, ready to strike as he rolled away from it.
Before the rattlesnake could strike, Hatcher dove on it from behind, grabbing its head in one palm and a coil of its body with the other. Using the forward momentum of her dive, she regained her feet and stood there, grinning at Wheeler and holding the furiously writhing reptile at arm’s length.
“I swear,” she said. “Leave you alone for a couple of seconds…”
Wheeler rose and panted as the adrenaline surge subsided. “Damn, Hatcher, you are one crazy woman.”
“Stop flirting with me,” she said. “You know I have a boyfriend.”
“Shit! We brought back a rattler from a hundred years ago. You’re holding a hundred-year-old snake!”
Hatcher waved it at him. “I don’t mean to break your train of philosophical rambling, but I’m already tired of wrestling this asshole. Could we please focus on the problem at hand?”
“Absolutely.” He ran to the camera chassis and pushed it off the platform. “Let’s send that bastard back to where he came from. Hang on a second.” He raced to the console and reset the Engine.
When finished, he ran toward Hatcher but stopped halfway there. “Wait,” he called over his shoulder as he sprinted to the truck and pulled out two shovels.
“Now we’re ready,” he added, as he dropped one at Hatcher’s feet and the other on the other side of the steel platform and ran back to the console.
The snake struggled furiously. With effort, Hatcher kept it under control.
“Okay,” he said. “When I start the engine, toss it on the platform. We’ll use the shovels to keep it there until it goes. Got it?”
“Yes, dammit, I got it. Start it already.”
Wheeler pulled the trigger and returned to the platform as Hatcher threw the angry reptile onto it. It coiled again and struck repeatedly at them as they worked to confine it inside the spinning globe of light.
After being poked hard twice, the snake advanced on Hatcher, forcing her to retreat a step. It slithered to the edge of the light globe, coiled and struck at Hatcher. The sphere bulged and dissipated with a bang.
The serpent’s body and the part of the shovel inside the globe disappeared. Still in flight from the strike, its severed head bounced off Hatcher’s midsection, the fangs snagging her fatigue blouse and spotting it with venom and blood. It landed on the platform with a thud, its mouth opening and closing reflexively.
They stood motionless for a long second.
Hatcher recovered first. “I hate snakes.”
“Damn. Sorry about that. But we learned something important.”
“What’s that?”
Wheeler grinned. “If you’re going to travel through time, you’d better make damn sure you keep your body inside the sphere.”